I'm a bit torn about the last line, too, Christopher. I think I like the idea of it, but maybe should've gone with either just lines 1+2 OR 1+3... Not sure!
For some reason (maybe it was posted as this originally or I'm confusing it with another entry), my mind says the last sentence should be something along the lines of "Jimmy is getting out of school early today".
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Finishing early wasn't enough?
This one is calm, soothing.
(The word verification for this one when translated into English: "I lick". What?!?)
"A fire is such a pretty thing." - Nero
*smile* another one for my faves list! the last line is morosely brilliant!!
I read the caption one line at a time as the picture loaded slowlier than usual for some reason; I think it's even funnier without the last sentence.
I'm a bit torn about the last line, too, Christopher. I think I like the idea of it, but maybe should've gone with either just lines 1+2 OR 1+3... Not sure!
But it DOES make all the hurt go away. As long as they don't catch you.
Carrie?
word verification: "decit"
Love it. Does that mean my mind works like yours?
I loved "early" and I like this too.
It's nice to know I wasn't alone after all.
The hurt comes back after a while so I need to throttle a manager or beat a customer to a pulp.
The flame also make my friends fly like a bird.. to heaven.
ha! genius!
Isaac, your comments rule. 8]
For some reason (maybe it was posted as this originally or I'm confusing it with another entry), my mind says the last sentence should be something along the lines of "Jimmy is getting out of school early today".
I love this more than I can say.
i can say u r like me i think
http://slimspickin.blogspot.com/
nice one, don't know why, but your posts often remind me of Buffy. Especially this one.
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